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Writing a conclusion that isn't a repeat

Restate the thesis in new words and say why it matters.

The common mistake

Copying the introduction word for word, or adding a brand-new argument.

Instead: Rephrase the thesis, pull the main points together, and end with the wider significance — no new evidence.

Worked example with Guide me

What should the last sentence of a conclusion do?

  1. Sugar · Should it bring in a new quote?
    Student · No.
  2. Sugar · What could it do instead?
    Student · Say why the argument matters beyond the essay.

Answer: Leave the reader with the bigger 'so what?'.

Try 3 practice questions

  1. 1. Can a conclusion add new evidence?

    Show answer

    No

  2. 2. Should you repeat the thesis word for word?

    Show answer

    No — rephrase it

  3. 3. What question should the final sentence answer?

    Show answer

    So what? Why does this matter?

Quick answers

What is the most common mistake with writing a conclusion that isn't a repeat?
Copying the introduction word for word, or adding a brand-new argument.
How do I get writing a conclusion that isn't a repeat right?
Rephrase the thesis, pull the main points together, and end with the wider significance — no new evidence.
Can you show a worked example?
What should the last sentence of a conclusion do? Leave the reader with the bigger 'so what?'.

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