Writing topic sentences
Each paragraph opens with the one point it proves.
The common mistake
Starting a paragraph with a quote or plot summary instead of a point.
Instead: First sentence = the paragraph's claim, linked to the thesis. Evidence and explanation follow.
Worked example with Guide me
A paragraph starts: 'In chapter 3, Jonas meets the Giver.' Fix it.
- Sugar · Is that a point or a plot event?Student · A plot event.
- Sugar · What does the paragraph try to prove?Student · That memory brings pain and wisdom.
Answer: 'Lowry shows that memory brings both pain and wisdom when Jonas first meets the Giver.'
Try 3 practice questions
1. Should a topic sentence be a quote?
Show answer
No — it should be your point
2. What should it connect back to?
Show answer
The thesis
3. What comes after the topic sentence?
Show answer
Evidence, then explanation
Quick answers
- What is the most common mistake with writing topic sentences?
- Starting a paragraph with a quote or plot summary instead of a point.
- How do I get writing topic sentences right?
- First sentence = the paragraph's claim, linked to the thesis. Evidence and explanation follow.
- Can you show a worked example?
- A paragraph starts: 'In chapter 3, Jonas meets the Giver.' Fix it. 'Lowry shows that memory brings both pain and wisdom when Jonas first meets the Giver.'
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